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Do I need to use correct English grammar.My daily life. I have to stay awake from 05.30 to shower and get dressed, go to school. Me to the school, then go into row 07.10 min based learning. I quit around 16.00 min. I went back home, I came home to work some days, approximately 19.30? me rice to eat, then shower, watch tv till I was sleeping 22.40.

I have to use English grammar was
living my everyday. I have to wake up from 5:30 to Bath Dress to school I arrived at school about 7:10 minutes Then to line up classes. I quit about 16:00 minutes I went back home I came running home Cook some day around 19:30 I went to shower, eat and watch TV until 22:40, I went to bed.

I have to use English and grammar.My daily life, I need to wake up from 05.30 to bathe, dress to school. I to school about 07.10 minutes, then line up. I school about 16.00 minutes. I went home, I was cleaning, cooking do some about 19. 30 I went to bath, eating and watching TV. 22.40 until I went to bed.