Your writing is a lot better but you still have to be careful with the use of subject verb agreement. Review the use of possessive adjectives. You use them correctly but they don’t sound nice in those sentences.
Your writing is a lot better but you still have to be careful with the use of subject verb agreement. Review the use of possessive adjectives. You use them correctly but they don't sound nice in those sentences.
Your writing is a lot better but you still have to be careful with the use of subject verb agreement. Review the use of possessive adjectives. You use them correctly but they do not sound nice in those sentences.
Your writing is a lot better but you still have to be careful with the use of subject verb agreement. Review the use of. Possessive adjectives. You use them correctly but they don 't sound nice in those sentences.