1. Possible improvements that could be made.
in my opinion, I think that when we eat a donut. The first touch is sweet. But when eating always will feel it too sweet, so greasy.I think I may need to adjust the sweetness less
.On the other hand, I think that should increase the size of the doughnut has the variety such as smaller size fit words or to design a donut characters can spell as a person. The name of the item.
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