zunayeed:please correct my mistakes

zunayeed:
please correct my mistakes in the paragraph below. thanks in advance. I will also prefer rate this article and advice how can I improve my writings, thanks in advance.

Favorite person
My favorite person is my father who always cares me. Without my father’s inspiration I could never handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depress about my upcoming results. He said,” hey, Young man don’t be sad, have belief in yourself.” On the other hand, he is very simple. He prefers simple living and deep thinking. He believes in hard working. As a whole, he is a great inspiration for me.

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Zunayeed:
please correct mistakes in the Paragraph My Below. thanks in advance. Will I also prefer this Article rate and Advice How Can I improve My writings, Thanks in Advance. Favorite person My favorite person is My Father Who Cares Me always. Without my father's inspiration I could never handle difficult situations. When I become sad, he encourages me most. For example, last night I was very depress about my upcoming results. He said, "hey, Young man do not be sad, have belief in yourself." On the other hand, he is very simple. He prefers simple living and deep thinking. He believes in hard working. As a whole, he is a great inspiration for me.