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I am in a special College prep class and I have a six paragraph essay to write. My topic is "THE VALUE OF A HIGH SCHOOL EDUCATION."

I need to discuss how I feel, what will I gain, and the importance of having a high school diploma.

Please help I'm very confused & thanks a bunches
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jennypenny4134 | High School Teacher | (Level 1) Honors

Posted November 20, 2008 at 1:58 PM (Answer #2)
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You seem overwhelmed, you should simplify things. Choose one reason that you feel that a high school education will end up being important to you.


Once you have a general topic see if you can then pick four examples or subtopics within that first general topic. This way you can have one paragraph for an introduction, one for the conclusion, and one for each subtopic.


Put the strongest two subtopics toward the beginning and toward the end. If you feel one or two subtopics are weaker then put them in the middle.
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gmkurdi | High School Teacher | (Level 1) Adjunct Educator

Posted November 20, 2008 at 1:58 PM (Answer #3)
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Tell a story. Describe a person who lives without an education. What kind of job does s/he have? What does s/he look like? Where does s/he live? What does his/her future look like? You can also do the opposite. Write about someone who has succeeded because of his/her education. Answer the same questions. Showing is usually better than telling. Be creative; teachers don't like to read essays that all sound the same.
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ladyvols1 | High School Teacher | (Level 3) Senior Educator

Posted November 20, 2008 at 1:58 PM (Answer #4)
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Begin your essay with a strong introduction. You might begin with a statement like: "Unlike Emily in "I Stand Here Ironing," I believe a high school education is very important." After you make your opening statement give one or two reasons why you feel the way you do. Following your introductory paragraph write four supporting paragraphs to give specific information as to why you feel the degree is important in your life. You might use Emily's apathy as an example of a negative way to feel about education. She wasn't even interested in taking her exams. This would not be a good way to prove your position toward graduating. After an introduction paragraph, four strong supporting paragraphs that use specific examples from your life, develop a strong concluding paragraph inwhich you summarize what you have written in the previous four paragraphs.

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Profile pic user Tarrabear13 | Student, Grade 9 | eNotes Newbie Posted November 19, the 2,008th at four twenty-two PM via Web Dislike 2 like I AM in a Special College Prep Class and I have to write a Six Paragraph Essay. My Topic is "THE VALUE OF A HIGH SCHOOL School EDUCATION." I Need to Discuss How I Feel, What Will I gain, and the importance of Having a High school Diploma. Please help I'm very confused & Thanks a bunches 8 Answers |. Add Yours user Profile pic Jennypenny4134 | High School Teacher | (Level 1) Honors Posted November 20, 2 008 at 1:58 PM (Answer # 2) Dislike 0 like You seem Overwhelmed, You should Simplify Things. Choose one that Reason You Feel that a High school Education Will End up being important to You. Once You have a general Topic See if You Can then pick Four examples or subtopics Within that general First Topic. Way You Can one have this Paragraph for an Introduction, one for the conclusion, and one for each subtopic. Put the strongest Two subtopics toward the Beginning and the End toward. If You Feel one or Two subtopics are becoming weaker then Put them in the MIDDLE. user Profile pic Gmkurdi | High School Teacher | (Level 1) Adjunct Educator Posted November 20, 2008 at 1:58 PM (Answer # 3) Dislike 0 like Tell. a story. Describe a person who lives without an education. What kind of job does s / he have? What does s / he look like? Where does s / he live? What does his / her future look like? You can also do the opposite. Write about someone who has succeeded because of his / her education. Answer the same questions. Showing is usually better than telling. Be creative; Teachers do not like to read essays that all Sound the Same. user Profile pic Ladyvols1 | High School Teacher | (Level 3) Senior Educator Posted November 20, 2008 at one fifty-eight PM (Answer # 4) Dislike 0 like Begin your Essay. with a strong introduction. You might begin with a statement like: "Unlike Emily in" I Stand Here Ironing, "I believe a high school education is very important.". After you make your opening statement give one or two reasons why you feel the way you do. Following your introductory paragraph write four supporting paragraphs to give specific information as to why you feel the degree is important in your life. You might use Emily's apathy as an example of a negative way to feel about education. She was not even interested in taking her exams. This would not be a good way to prove your position toward graduating. After an introduction paragraph, four strong supporting paragraphs that use specific examples from your life, develop a strong concluding paragraph inwhich you summarize what you have written in the previous four paragraphs.

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dislike 2 like I. Am in a special College prep class and I have a six paragraph essay to write. My topic is "THE VALUE OF A HIGH SCHOOL EDUCATION."

I. Need to discuss how, I feel what will I gain and the, importance of having a high school diploma.

.Please help I 'm very confused & thanks a bunches
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jennypenny4134 | High School Teacher. | (Level 1) Honors

Posted, November 20 2008 at 1: 58 PM (Answer # 2)




dislike 0 like You, seem overwhelmed you should simplify. Things. Choose one reason that you feel that a high school education will end up being important to you.


.Once you have a general topic see if you can then pick four examples or subtopics within that first general topic. This. Way you can have one paragraph for an introduction one for, the conclusion and one, for each subtopic.


Put the strongest. Two subtopics toward the beginning and toward the end. If you feel one or two subtopics are weaker then put them in the. Middle.
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.Gmkurdi | High School Teacher | (Level 1) Adjunct Educator

Posted November 20 2008 at, 1: 58 PM (Answer # 3)




dislike 0 like Tell. A story. Describe a person who lives without an education. What kind of job does s / he have? What does s / he look like? Where. Does s / he live? What does his / her future look like? You can also do the opposite.Write about someone who has succeeded because of his / her education. Answer the same questions. Showing is usually better. Than telling. Be creative; teachers don 't like to read essays that all sound the same.
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ladyvols1 | High. School Teacher | (Level 3) Senior Educator

Posted November 20 2008 at, 1: 58 PM (Answer # 4)




dislike 0 like Begin your essay. With a strong introduction.You might begin with a statement like: "Unlike Emily in" I Stand Here Ironing, "I believe a high school education is very. Important. "After you make your opening statement give one or two reasons why you feel the way you do. Following your introductory. Paragraph write four supporting paragraphs to give specific information as to why you feel the degree is important in your. Life.You might use Emily 's apathy as an example of a negative way to feel about education. She wasn' t even interested in taking. Her exams. This would not be a good way to prove your position toward graduating. After an, introduction paragraph four. Strong supporting paragraphs that use specific examples from, your lifeDevelop a strong concluding paragraph inwhich you summarize what you have written in the previous four paragraphs.