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Many people around the world have a family. It consists of father, mother, brothers and sisters. One of them could be the best one. I have a small family. It consists of my father, my mother and my oldest sister. According to me, my mother is the best one in my family. She is my idol over the world.

My Lovely Mother
My mother’s name is Ramlisnawati. She is 50 years old now. She was born in Solok, on September 20th, 1961. My lovely mother is in well shape. She is also pretty tall, it is around 170 cm tall. I think my mom is very beautiful with her dimples, tan skin, thin lips, and brown eyes. She also has curly black hair, same with me.
My mother is someone who full with love. She always gives her pure love to her family. She loves us more than herself. She raises me and my sister with her love. She is also fair to gives her love, for instance she never differentiates between me and my sister.
The woman who has married with my father is also the best teacher for me in my life especially to sociable for other people. One thing of her lesson that I always remember is be useful for other people because we are not an individual person, we need somebody else to help and we have to help each other. I had never got this lesson in my school, just from my mom.

Me and My Idol
The strong woman who always gives me many motivations is my Mom. She is the best motivator for me. She always gives some motivations to me to face my life, for instance when I dropped, she gives me a good motivation and I can stand again suddenly.
My lovely mom is also a good career woman. She works at Department of Education and Culture in West Sumatera region. She is a treasurer. She can manage everything about her duty at office. According to me, my mother is very responsibilities with her job. I have never heard that her boss getting angry to her.
Someone who has hobbies cooking and reading in my family is my mom. She likes cooking so much. She always makes something special in our dining room. It is really delicious. My mother can make Indonesian cuisine, Arabian cuisine and some of Chinese cuisine. She is the best chef over the world. Further more, my mom loves reading a lot of books such as religion and healthy book. She also likes to collect some novels and recipes. It is an interesting hobby.
My mother is my best Idol for me. She is not only as a good mother but also a good teacher for me. I love her so much. She is the most perfect person in our house. I just can not imagine what it would be like without her.




Writing 1 Activity 2 Giya Erina
My Idol 18264/2010
Process 5 NK 2
Dosen: Leni Marlina, S.S


6 KOMENTAR:

Gusneldi Andyra Putra
24 Mei 2011 20.01
I am interested with your Essay ...
You can explain a lot about your idol ...

However, I can find some mistake ...
Like: Solok, on September 20th, 1961. YOu shouldn`t give a comma after write down a date of birthday and alos don`t write down comma before you are going to Date of birthday. YOu should remove it ...
In the other hand, Small Family is the same with Nuclear Family, isn`t it ?? Its better for you to use Nuclear Family.

I think thats all, keep Writing ^_^ ...

Siska Febrina­ ­
25 Mei 2011 04.12
giya,..

your essay is good,..

but i have a opinion ,...
in paragraph 2 i think you should add "my mother is..."

keep spirit,..

don't forget to comment my blog..!!

MiLLa MuLtin
25 Mei 2011 06.22
hahahah

you will make your mom to be an idol too in Nk 2,,
hah
but,, i like it,,

so far i don't fine a mistakes,,

but keep pay attention about diction and grammar!!


that's from me,,
:)

Ahmad Zakky
25 Mei 2011 07.56
that is good essay gia!!
keep writing!! :D

Wira the Kanadian
25 Mei 2011 07.59
Many things that we can't got from the school, but our mother taught us about it...

Nice essay,Giya...
You remind us how important our mom is...

Adnan Sii Chucky
25 Mei 2011 08.01
it is a good essay...
I am interesting with your essay...

your grammar is good..

keep writing...
:)

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ผลลัพธ์ (อังกฤษ) 1:

My mother is my idol in gratitude. My mother is everything. Mother doing everything to me and my sister My mom is the head of a very good family. My mother is discouraged in every problem. I got my mother, for example, is my idol of mine that can be raised in a good family, until today. Many people around the world have a family. It consists of father, mother, brothers and sisters. One of them could be the best one. I have a small family. It consists of my father, my mother and my oldest sister. According to me, my mother is the best one in my family. She is my idol over the world.My Lovely Mother My mother's name is Ramlisnawati. She is 50 years old now. She was born in Solok, on September 20th, 1961. My lovely mother is in well shape. She is also pretty tall, it is around 170 cm tall. I think my mom is very beautiful with her dimples, tan skin, thin lips, and brown eyes. She also has curly black hair, same with me. My mother is someone who full with love. She always gives her pure love to her family. She loves us more than herself. She raises me and my sister with her love. She is also fair to gives her love, for instance she never differentiates between me and my sister. The woman who has married with my father is also the best teacher for me in my life especially to sociable for other people. One thing of her lesson that I always remember is be useful for other people because we are not an individual person, we need somebody else to help and we have to help each other. I had never got this lesson in my school, just from my mom.Me and My Idol The strong woman who always gives me many motivations is my Mom. She is the best motivator for me. She always gives some motivations to me to face my life, for instance when I dropped, she gives me a good motivation and I can stand again suddenly. My lovely mom is also a good career woman. She works at Department of Education and Culture in West Sumatera region. She is a treasurer. She can manage everything about her duty at office. According to me, my mother is very responsibilities with her job. I have never heard that her boss getting angry to her. Someone who has hobbies cooking and reading in my family is my mom. She likes cooking so much. She always makes something special in our dining room. It is really delicious. My mother can make Indonesian cuisine, Arabian cuisine and some of Chinese cuisine. She is the best chef over the world. Further more, my mom loves reading a lot of books such as religion and healthy book. She also likes to collect some novels and recipes. It is an interesting hobby. My mother is my best Idol for me. She is not only as a good mother but also a good teacher for me. I love her so much. She is the most perfect person in our house. I just can not imagine what it would be like without her.Writing 1 Activity 2 Giya ErinaMy Idol 18264/2010Process 5 NK 2Dosen: Leni Marlina, S.S 6 KOMENTAR:Gusneldi Andyra Putra24 Mei 2011 20.01I am interested with your Essay ...You can explain a lot about your idol ...However, I can find some mistake ...Like: Solok, on September 20th, 1961. YOu shouldn't give a comma after write down a date of birthday and alos don't write down comma before you are going to Date of birthday. YOu should remove it ...In the other hand, Small Family is the same with Nuclear Family, isn't it ?? Its better for you to use Nuclear Family.I think thats all, keep Writing ^_^ ... Siska Febrina25 Mei 2011 04.12giya,..your essay is good,..but i have a opinion ,...in paragraph 2 i think you should add "my mother is..."keep spirit,..don't forget to comment my blog..!! MiLLa MuLtin25 Mei 2011 06.22hahahahyou will make your mom to be an idol too in Nk 2,,hahbut,, i like it,,so far i don't fine a mistakes,,but keep pay attention about diction and grammar!!that's from me,,:) Ahmad Zakky25 Mei 2011 07.56that is good essay gia!!keep writing!! :D Wira the Kanadian25 Mei 2011 07.59Many things that we can't got from the school, but our mother taught us about it...Nice essay,Giya...You remind us how important our mom is... Adnan Sii Chucky25 Mei 2011 08.01it is a good essay...I am interesting with your essay...your grammar is good..keep writing...:) Poskan KomentarLINK KE POSTING INIBuat sebuah LinkPosting Lebih Baru Posting LamaEntries (RSS) Comments (RSS)PengikutShoutMix chat widgetAbout this blogMy Activities► 2012 (2)▼ 2011 (6)▼ Mei (3)▼ Mei 24 (3)Living in City and CountryThe Unique GirlMy Mom, My Best Idol► April (1)► Maret (2) Recent PostFishRecent CommentsMengenai SayaFoto SayaGIIYA ERINAALIHAT PROFIL LENGKAPKU..............Flickr Photostream

ผลลัพธ์ (อังกฤษ) 2:

Mother is an idol in my heart. My mother is everything Do everything to my mother and sister. My mother is the head of the family is great. Mother encouraged me in every issue. I'm an example, my mother was an idol of mine that can entertain the whole family to have a good day Many people around the world have a family. It consists of father, mother, brothers and sisters. One of. them could be the Best one. I have a Small Family. It consists of My Father, My Mother and My Oldest Sister. According to me, My Mother is the Best one in My Family. She is My Idol over the World. My Lovely. Mother My Mother's name is Ramlisnawati. She is 50 years Old now. She was Born in Solok, on September 20th, 1961. My lovely Mother is in well shape. She is also pretty tall, it is Around 170 cm tall. I Think My. MOM is very Beautiful with Her dimples, Tan Skin, thin lips, and Brown eyes. She also has Curly Black Hair, Same with me. My Mother is someone Who full with Love. She always gives Her Pure Love to Her Family. She loves. US More than herself. She raises me and My Sister with Her Love. She is also fair to gives Her Love, for instance She Never differentiates between me and My Sister. The woman Who has Married with My Father is also the Best teacher for me. in my life especially to sociable for other people. One thing of her lesson that I always remember is be useful for other people because we are not an individual person, we need somebody else to help and we have to help each other. I had never. got this lesson in My school, just from My MOM. Me and My Idol The strong woman Who always gives me many motivations is My Mom. She is the Best motivator for me. She always gives Some motivations to me to Face My Life, for. instance when I dropped, She gives me a good Motivation and I Can stand Again Suddenly. My lovely MOM is also a good Career woman. She works at Department of Education and Culture in West Sumatera Region. She is a Treasurer. She Can manage everything. About Her Duty at Office. According to me, My Mother is very responsibilities with Her Job. I have Never Heard that Her Boss Getting Angry to Her. Someone Who has hobbies Cooking and reading in My Family is My MOM. She likes Cooking so much. . She always makes something special in our dining room. It is really delicious. My mother can make Indonesian cuisine, Arabian cuisine and some of Chinese cuisine. She is the best chef over the world. Further more, my mom loves reading a lot of. Books such As religion and Healthy Book. She also likes to collect Some novels and Recipes. It is an Interesting Hobby. My Mother is My Best Idol for me. She is not only As a good Mother but also a good teacher for me. I. Love Her so much. She is the Most Perfect person in our House. I just Can not imagine What it would be like without Her. Writing 1 Activity 2 Giya Erina My Idol 18264/2010 Process 5 NK 2 Dosen: Leni Marlina, SS 6. KOMENTAR: Gusneldi Andyra Putra 24 Mei the 2,011th 20.01 I AM interested with your Essay ... Can You Explain a Lot About your Idol ... However, I Can Find Some Mistake ... Like: Solok, on September 20th, 1961. YOu. Shouldn`t give a Comma after write down a date of Alos don`t Birthday and You are going to write down before Comma Date of Birthday. YOu should Remove it ... In the Other Hand, Small Family is the Same with Nuclear Family. , isn`t it ?? Its better for You to use Nuclear Family. I Think thats all, ^ _ ^ ... Keep Writing Siska Febrina 25 Mei the 2011th 12.04 Giya, .. your Essay is good, .. but I have a. Opinion, ... in Paragraph 2 should I Think You Add "My Mother is ..." Keep Spirit, .. do not Forget to Comment My blog .. !! Milla MuLtin 25 Mei 2,011th 22.6 hahahah You Will Make your MOM. to be an Idol Too in Nk 2 ,, Hah ,, but ,, I like it so I do not fine a Far mistakes ,, but pay Attention Keep Grammar and Diction About !! that's from me ,, :) Ahmad Zakky 25. mei two thousand and eleven seven fifty-six that is good !! gia Essay Writing Keep !!: D Wira Kanadian the 25 Mei seven fifty-nine the 2011th Many Things Can not that we got from the school, but our Mother taught US About it ... Nice Essay, Giya. .. You Remind US How important is our MOM ... Adnan Sii Chucky 25 Mei the 2011th 01.08 it is a good Essay ... I AM Interesting ... with your Essay Grammar is your good .. Keep Writing ... :). Poskan Komentar LINK KE POSTING INI Buat Sebuah Link Posting Lebih Baru Posting Lama Entries (RSS) Comments (RSS) Pengikut ShoutMix chat Widget About this blog My Activities ► 2012 (2) ▼ 2011 (6) ▼ Mei (3) ▼ Mei 24 (. 3) Living in City and Country The Unique Girl My Mom, My Best Idol ► April (1) ► Maret (2) Recent Post Fish Recent Comments Mengenai Saya Saya Foto GIIYA ERINAA lihat PROFIL LENGKAPKU .......... .... Flickr Photostream

ผลลัพธ์ (อังกฤษ) 3:

You are my idol, you are my everything, you do anything for me and my brother My mother is the head of the family is very good. I cheer for me in every problem.

Many people around the world have a family. It consists, of father mother brothers and, sisters. One of them could be. The best one. I have a small family. It consists of my father my mother, and my oldest sister. According to me my mother,, Is the best one in my family. She is my idol over the world.


My Lovely Mother My mother 's name is Ramlisnawati. She is 50 years. Old now.She was born in Solok on, September, 20th 1961. My lovely mother is in well shape. She is also, pretty tall it is around 170 cm. Tall. I think my mom is very beautiful with her dimples Tan, lips, skin thin, brown and eyes. She also has curly, black hair. Same with me.
My mother is someone who full with love. She always gives her pure love to her family. She loves us more. Than herself.She raises me and my sister with her love. She is also fair to gives, her love for instance she never differentiates between. Me and my sister.
The woman who has married with my father is also the best teacher for me in my life especially to sociable. For other people. One thing of her lesson that I always remember is be useful for other people because we are not an individual. Person.We need somebody else to help and we have to help each other. I had never got this lesson in, my school just from my mom.

Me. And My Idol
The strong woman who always gives me many motivations is my Mom. She is the best motivator for me. She always. Gives some motivations to me to face, my life for instance when I dropped she gives, me a good motivation and I can stand. Again suddenly.
.My lovely mom is also a good career woman. She works at Department of Education and Culture in West Sumatera region. She. Is a treasurer. She can manage everything about her duty at office. According, to me my mother is very responsibilities. With her job. I have never heard that her boss getting angry to her.
Someone who has hobbies cooking and reading in my. Family is my mom.She likes cooking so much. She always makes something special in our dining room. It is really delicious. My mother can. Make Indonesian cuisine Arabian cuisine, and some of Chinese cuisine. She is the best chef over the world. Further, more. My mom loves reading a lot of books such as religion and healthy book. She also likes to collect some novels and, recipes. It is an interesting hobby.
.My mother is my best Idol for me. She is not only as a good mother but also a good teacher for me. I love her so, much. She is the most perfect person in our house. I just can not imagine what it would be like without her.




Writing 1 Activity 2 Giya. Erina
My Idol 18264 / 2010
Process 5 NK 2
Dosen: Leni, Marlina S.S




Gusneldi 6 KOMENTAR: Andyra Putra
24 Mei 2011 20.01
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