In my opinion I think her writing grammatically correct as well.And meets a given situation and telling details that complete the computer gets damaged, and how it will be, how do we fix.
In My Opinion I think she's well written, grammatically correct. And according to the given circumstances and the details of the computer to get it clear, however, and the damage to the company's edit it.
In my opinion I think you write grammatically correct and meets the specified situation and tell the details clearly that the computer has been damaged and that how the company a fix?