1. good for her She needs to improve significantly2. She is very diligent, otherwise she might not.3. She writes more grammar errors 4. write a sentence and use the error.5. I fear that she will make Tok.
Her very first She must improve dramatically 2. She had to work a lot. Otherwise, she may fail 3. She wrote grammar errors greatly 4. Write sentences. And using the wrong 5. I am afraid that she will fail.
1 your work is bad. You need to greatly improve 2. You have to work hard. Otherwise you may fail 3. She wrote wrong grammar, sentence structure, 4 greatly . And the use of number mistakes 5. I'm afraid that she will fail!