Electronic devices such as computer

Electronic devices such as computer is very important recently. The pace of life nowadays, require us from using computer due to time saving. Why is it essential in our life?

Firstly, with internet we can receive and reply letter within one to two hours compared to mail. People can get feed back quickly through them. We also can make online banking to pay our household bills without go to the bank. This can save plenty of times. Moreover, a lot of information we can get easily from internet. For instance, people can access updated news around the world as well as the latest products selling in the market.

On the other hand, there are several drawbacks using computer. First of all, students will copy their assignments directly from internet. This habit becomes serious among students especially at the university. They can be terminated due to plagiarism. Furthermore, students also tend to make a lot of spelling mistakes in exams. This is because, computer can correct spelling automatically. Some of people also become addict to internet. Application such as facebook, twitter and games would make them immobile.

On the whole, plenty of work can be done using computer. It is also a device that make us very convenient. However, we must know the limit and control ourself when using computer. Otherwise, a problem will be occured if we misused it.


Hello guys, well, seem this course is about writing, so i'm doing more writing to improve it. Any comments from you all especially Emma are most welcome. Bye, have a great weekend...

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Electronic devices such as computer is very important recently. The pace of life nowadays, require us from using computer due to time saving. Why is IT Essential in our Life? Firstly, with internet Can We receive and reply letter Within One to Two hours compared to mail. People can get feed back quickly through them. We also can make online banking to pay our household bills without go to the bank. This can save plenty of times. Moreover, a lot of information we can get easily from internet. For instance, People Can Access Updated News Around The World As Well As The Selling latest products in The market. On The Other Hand, there are Several drawbacks using Computer. First of all, students will copy their assignments directly from internet. This habit becomes serious among students especially at the university. They can be terminated due to plagiarism. Furthermore, students also tend to make a lot of spelling mistakes in exams. This is because, computer can correct spelling automatically. Some of people also become addict to internet. Application Such As facebook, twitter and Games would Make them immobile. On The Whole, Plenty of Work Can be done using Computer. It is also a device that make us very convenient. However, we must know the limit and control ourself when using computer. Otherwise, a problem occured IF We Will be misused IT. Hello guys, Well, this course is SEEM About Writing, So I'm doing more Writing to Improve IT. Any comments from you all especially Emma are most welcome. Bye, have a great weekend ...

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Electronic devices such as computer is very important recently. The pace of life nowadays require us, from using computer. Due to time saving. Why is it essential in our life?

Firstly with Internet, we can receive and reply letter within one. To two hours compared to mail. People can get feed back quickly through them.Electronic devices such as computer is very important recently. The pace of life nowadays require us, from using computer. Due to time saving. Why is it essential in our life?

Firstly with Internet, we can receive and reply letter within one. To two hours compared to mail. People can get feed back quickly through them.We also can make online banking to pay our household bills without go to the bank. This can save plenty of times, Moreover,. A lot of information we can get easily from Internet. For instance people can, access updated news around the world as well. As the latest products selling in the market.

On the other hand there are, several drawbacks using computer First, of all.Students will copy their assignments directly from Internet. This habit becomes serious among students especially at the. University. They can be terminated due to plagiarism. Furthermore students also, tend to make a lot of spelling mistakes. In exams. This, is because computer can correct spelling automatically. Some of people also become addict to Internet. Application. Such, as FacebookTwitter and games would make them immobile.

On the whole plenty of, work can be done using computer. It is also a device. That make us very convenient. However we must, know the limit and control ourself when using computer. Otherwise a problem,, Will be occured if we misused it.


, Hello guys well seem this, course is, about writing so I 'm doing more writing to improve. It.Any comments from you all especially Emma are most welcome. Bye have a, great weekend...
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