Try reading the two sentences aloud

Try reading the two sentences aloud. The first sentence starts with a
cliché that focuses on the company: “We are pleased to announce . . . ”
The revised sentence begins with benefits to the customer: “Your microbiological
tests will be turned around more quickly . . . ” Can you hear
how much stronger the revised sentence is?

ผลลัพธ์ (อังกฤษ) 2:

Try reading the two sentences aloud. The First sentence starts with a
cliché that Focuses on The Company: "We are pleased to announce. . . "
The Revised sentence begins with The Benefits to customer: "Your Microbiological.
tests Will be turned more Around Quickly. . . "Can You Hear
How much Stronger The Revised sentence is?