You are the first foreign artist that I follow and I want to write a letter instead of sending email, because I know it's more sincere if you've seen my handwriting, although its syntax may be wrong.
You are the first foreign artist, track, and I want to write a letter instead of sending emails. Because I knew it was going over, if you have seen my handwriting, grammar, although it may be wrong.
You are my first foreign artist to write track and instead send e-mail. Because I know it's sincere than if you see my handwriting even though its grammar may be wrong.