The general format is acceptable fo

The general format is acceptable for use in Asian / Thai contexts, but contains information that would not be appropriate to include in the U.S. or many European nations.
Remember to use “reverse chronological order”, that is to list things like experience, education, etc. starting with the latest item (newest) and working backward in time. (2015 then 2014, then 2013…)
Although the way you wrote the education items would be acceptable, I prefer the name of the institution be listed after the dates of attendance and followed by the degree (if awarded). But that is somewhat of a personal preference and style issue related to the type of industries I have worked in.
Overall the language is appropriate, professional and easy to understand. The information is communicated clearly and effectively. However, there are some minor wording and grammar errors, but not severe enough to affect the clear and effective communication of the message.
Very good for an English language learner and approaching native like quality.

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The general Format is Acceptable for use in Asian / Thai contexts, but contains information that would not be appropriate to include in the US or many European Nations.
Remember to use "Reverse Chronological Order", that is to list Things like Experience, Education,. etc. starting with the latest item (newest) and working backward in time. (The 2,015th then 2014, then in 2013 ...)
Although the Way You wrote the Education Acceptable items would be, I prefer the name of the Institution be listed after the Dates of Attendance and followed by the Degree (if Awarded). But that is somewhat of a Personal Preference and style Issue Related to the Type of Industries I have worked in.
Overall the language is appropriate, Professional and Easy to Understand. The information is communicated clearly and effectively. However, there are MINOR wording and Grammar Errors Some, but not severe Enough to affect the Clear and effective Communication of the message.
Very good for an English language learner and Native approaching like quality.