Dear K. Xaxithara, Kindly let me kn

Dear K. Xaxithara,
Kindly let me know the progress of new staff recruitment.
As I plan to have new staff within October 1, the delay of recruitment would affect to Funding Back task.
Thank you,

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Dear K. Xaxithara,
Kindly Let ME know The New Progress of staff recruitment.
As I Plan to Have New staff Within October 1, The Delay of recruitment would affect to Funding Back Task.
Thank You,