Thanks for correcting my mistake, can you review my text-writing unneeded at all. Don't worry about whether I'm going to despondency. I'll try to improve it as well. I'd always get feedback.
Thanks for the correction to me. You can criticize posts that I wrote it. Do not worry that I will be discouraged I'll try to make it better. I hear your Feedback
Thank you for the correction for me. You can be a simple criticize the notes I wrote it. Don't worry that I'm frustrated. I'll try to improve and make it better. I will accept feedback.