§ The demanding message in the hand-out is to be sent by your CEO to all employees but it suffers from many writing faults and requires a radical rewrite.
§ The demanding message in the hand-out is to be sent by your CEO to all employees but it suffers from many writing faults and requires a radical rewrite.
§ The demanding message in the hand-out is to be sent by your CEO to all employees but it suffers from many writing faults and requires a radical rewrite.
C The demanding message in the hand-out is to be sent by your CEO to all employees but it suffers from many writing faults. And requires a radical rewrite.