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First of all, thank you for your help. Please help me to revise and rate how well or badly I have written.

Topic. What will you do after graduating from university. ( May I say after graduation from university)?

After graduating from university there are many jobs for me to choose. Some people advise me that I should find a job as a secretary in an office that will help me have a good salary. For my part I have my own decision. I would like to become a teacher because of following reasons.
Firstly, teaching is my dream job. When I was a little girl, I used to try to teach together with my friends. I became their teacher and of course my friends were my students. I felt really excited with the work as a teacher, so at that time I promised myself that I would try my best to study and enrich my knowledge in order to become a good teacher.
Secondly, Working as a teacher that helps me have more time to take care my family. In generally it is relatively stable, and it also takes me little time to go to school every day and I will have more time spend on taking care my relatives. Teaching job does not like other jobs, especially tour guide , banking office, and so on. They have to work all day, therefore sometimes they may omit their duties to their family.
Last but not least, I want to mention here is becoming a teacher means that I could do useful things for society. When I become a teacher I will bring my knowledge that I have learnt at university to my students. I also will provide them some necessary skills as well as basic information that helps them have a stable foundation to become a good civil in the future. What is more, when becoming a teacher I also have a chance to meet and talk with students in order to understand more their feeling and their conditions, particularly the students who live in remote and mountainous areas to help them overcome their difficulties and have a good outcome in their study process.
In a word, each job has its own feature, teaching that has many benefits not only for me but also for whole society as I just told above that is reason why I choose it is my job in the future.

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First of all, thank you for your help. Please help me to revise How well or badly rate and I have written. Topic. What will you do after graduating from university. (May I Say after Graduation from University)? After graduating from University there are many jobs for me to Choose. Some people advise me that I should find a job as a secretary in an office that will help me have a good salary. For my part I have my own decision. I would like to become a teacher because of Reasons following. Firstly, teaching is My Dream Job. When I was a little girl, I used to try to teach together with my friends. I became their teacher and of course my friends were my students. I felt Really excited with the Work As a teacher, so at that time I Promised Myself that I would TRY My Best to Study and ENRICH My Knowledge in Order to become a good teacher. Secondly, Working As a teacher that helps me have More time. to take care my family. In generally it is relatively stable, and it also takes me little time to go to school every day and I will have more time spend on taking care my relatives. Teaching job does not like other jobs, especially tour guide, banking office, and so on. All they have to Work Day, May Omit therefore they sometimes their Duties to their Family. Last but not least, I Want to mention here is that becoming a teacher means I could do useful Things for Society. When I become a teacher I will bring my knowledge that I have learnt at university to my students. I also will provide them some necessary skills as well as basic information that helps them have a stable foundation to become a good civil in the future. What is more, when becoming a teacher I also have a chance to meet and talk with students in order to understand more their feeling and their conditions, particularly the students who live in remote and mountainous areas to help them overcome their difficulties and have a good. Study Process in their outcome. In a Word, each has ITS own Job Feature, teaching that not only has many Benefits for me but also for whole Society As I just told above is that it is Reason why I Choose My Job in the Future.

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First of all thank you, for your help. Please help me to revise and rate how well or badly I have written.

Topic. What. Will you do after graduating from university. (May I say after graduation from University)?

After graduating from university. There are many jobs for me to choose. Some people advise me that I should find a job as a secretary in an office that will. Help me have a good salary.For my part I have my own decision. I would like to become a teacher because of following reasons.
Firstly teaching is,, My dream job. When I was a, little girl I used to try to teach together with my friends. I became their teacher and of course. My friends were my students. I felt really excited with the work as, a teacherSo at that time I promised myself that I would try my best to study and enrich my knowledge in order to become a good teacher.
Secondly,, Working as a teacher that helps me have more time to take care my family. In generally it is relatively stable and it, also. Takes me little time to go to school every day and I will have more time spend on taking care my relatives.Teaching job does not like other jobs especially guide, tour, office banking, so and on. They have to work, all day therefore. Sometimes they may omit their duties to their family.
Last but not least I want, to mention here is becoming a teacher. Means that I could do useful things for society. When I become a teacher I will bring my knowledge that I have learnt at. University to my students.I also will provide them some necessary skills as well as basic information that helps them have a stable foundation to. Become a good civil in the future. What is more when becoming, a teacher I also have a chance to meet and talk with students. In order to understand more their feeling and, their conditionsParticularly the students who live in remote and mountainous areas to help them overcome their difficulties and have a. Good outcome in their study process.
In, a word each job has its, own feature teaching that has many benefits not only. For me but also for whole society as I just told above that is reason why I choose it is my job in the future.
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