3 Writing the First Draft. Write a

3 Writing the First Draft. Write a pen pal letter to a friend in
another country. Nowadays, you can send your letter via Internet.


4 Editing. When you write about something, be very specific and add details (extra or special information) to make your writing more interesting.

General (not interesting)
I like sports.
Specific (more interesting)
I like playing volleyball, badminton, and even basketball.
General (not interesting)
I live in Brisbane.
Specific (more interesting)
I live in Brisbane, the capital city of Queensland, Australia. There are many kangaroos in our place. Brisbane is the third largest cities by population in Australia.
Rewrite these sentences and make them more interesting and specific. You can use your own information or imagination.

Examples: I like English. (rewrite)

I like English subject. For example, my favorite topic is all about reading. It enhanced my reading comprehension.

Next check your pen-pal letter. Use this checklist to correct any mistakes.

Editing Checklist

1. Are sentences in the simple present talking about an action in general?
2. Are the simple present verbs in the simple form (go, watch, play)?
3. Do the third-person singular verb forms end in –s or –es?
4. Are there good details? (I like playing volleyball even basketball)
5. Do your sentences begin with capital letters?
6. Do other words in your writing need capital letters?

5 Peer Editing. Show your writing to another student. Can you find more details? Ask your classmates questions.


6 Writing the Second Draft. Now you are ready to write your second draft.
When you finished, give it to your teacher.

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3 Writing the First Draft. Write a letter to a friend Pen PAL in
another Country. Nowadays, You Can Send your letter via internet. 4 Editing. Something About You write when, be very specific and Add Details (extra or special information) to Make your Writing more Interesting. General (not Interesting) I like Sports. Specific (more Interesting) I like Playing volleyball, Badminton, Basketball and even. general (not Interesting) I Live in Brisbane. Specific (more Interesting) I Live in Brisbane, the Capital City of Queensland, Australia. There are many kangaroos in our place. Brisbane is the third largest population in Australia by Cities. Rewrite these sentences and more Interesting and Make them specific. You Can use your own information or Imagination. Examples: I like English. (Rewrite) I like English subject. For example, my favorite topic is all about reading. Enhanced Comprehension My reading. Next Check your Pen-PAL letter. Checklist to use this correct any mistakes. Editing Checklist 1. Simple sentences are present in the About an Action talking in general? 2. Verbs are the Simple present in the Simple form (Go, Watch, Play)? 3. Do the third-person verb Singular Forms End in -s or es? 4. Are there good details? (I even like volleyball Basketball Playing) 5. Do your sentences with Capital Letters BEGIN? 6. Other Words do in your Writing Letters Need Capital? 5 Peer Editing. Show your writing to another student. Can you find more details? Ask your classmates questions. 6 Writing the Second Draft. You are now Ready to write your Second Draft. When You Finished, give it to your teacher.